Most authors
use indirect
which includes
- physical
descriptions
"The first man was
smalland quick, dark of face, with restless eyes and
sharp, strong features.
Every part of him was defined: small, strong hands, slender arms, a
thin and
bony nose. Behind him walked his opposite, a huge man, shapeless of face, with
large,
pale eyes, with wide, sloping shoulders; and he walked heavily,
dragging his feet a little, the
way a bear drags his paws. His arms did not
swing at his sides, but hung
loosely."
- characters'
actions
His huge companion dropped his
blankets
and flung himself down and drank from the surface of the green pool;
drank with long gulps,
snorting into the water like a horse. The small man
stepped nervously beside him.
- characters' thoughts, feelings, and
speeches
"'Guys like us, that work
on
ranches, are the loneliest guys n the world. They got no family. They
don't belong no
place....With us, it ain't like that. We got a future."
[]
"For the
first timebecame conscious of the outside. He
crounched down in the hay and listened. 'I done a
real bad thing,' he said.
'I shouldn't had did that. George'll be mad. An'...he said...an'hide
in the
brush till he come....'"
- the
comments
and reactions of other characters
"Crooks
interrupted brutally. 'You guys is just kiddin'
yourself. You'll talk about it a hell of a lot,
but you son't get no land.
You'll be a swamper here till they take you out in a box. Hell, I
seen too
many guys. Lennie here'll quit an' be on the road in two, three, weeks. Seems
like
ever' guy got land in his head.'"
- occurs with statements by the author,
giving
his/her opinion of the character(s). [e.g. Steinbeck writes that Slim
has "God-like
eyes."]
Steinbeck writes that
Lennie drags his feet the way
"a bear drags his
paws."
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