In his poem
titled Creative Writing, Gervase Phinn employs a number of figures of speech and other devices
of literary form, including the following:
Figures of speech
that are word schemes:
- Repetition, as in the first lines of all the
stanzas. - Contrast, as in the repetitive
opening lines of the stanzas and the vivid middle lines of the stanzas. - Metrical emphasis, often through departures from an
expected metrical pattern, as in these heavily emphasized words from line 10:
"dark, pine scented
woods."
- , or the repetition of sounds,
usually consonant sounds, as in lines 1-2:
My story on
Monday
began:
Mountainous
seas
crashed
on the
cliffs . .
.
Figures of speech that are
tropes:
- , as in the relations between the middle two
lines of each stanza and the last line of each stanza. - Metaphors, as in the reference to "Red
tongues of fire" in line 6. - Ultimate
irony, as in the way the final stanza suggests the final defeat of the writers
creativity and a final victory for the teachers prosaic dullness and concern with mere stale
conventions.
Other Devices of Literary
Form:
- Vivid
adjectives, as in line three: And the
desolate land grew wetter
... - Emphatic
variations in line lengths, as in the line that follows the
one just quoted: The teacher wrote a little note: Remember the capital
letter! Here the much longer line that ends the stanza helps contrast the
voice of the speaker with the voice of the teacher.
Contrasts in language and
tone,as in lines 2-3 and 1 and 4. Lines 1 and 4 are plain
and prosaic;lines 2-3 are striking and memorable. In contrast to lines 2-3, line 4is deflating
and ironically bland.
- , as in the line just
quoted. - Vivid verbs, as in
"twists" in line 11.
The poem is
a€“ at once comic and sad €“ on the ways that teaching can sometimes kill the interest of
students and on the ways that teachers, rather than inspiring and encouraging students, can
often destroy their self-confidence and interest.
For an especially helpful
discussion of this poem, see the "Heinemann.com" link below.
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