Sunday, November 6, 2016

What are some figures of speech used in the poem by Gervase Phinn titled "Creative Writing"?

In his poem
titled Creative Writing, Gervase Phinn employs a number of figures of speech and other devices
of literary form, including the following:

Figures of speech
that are word schemes:


  • Repetition, as in the first lines of all the
    stanzas.
  • Contrast, as in the repetitive
    opening lines of the stanzas and the vivid middle lines of the stanzas.

  • Metrical emphasis, often through departures from an
    expected metrical pattern, as in these heavily emphasized words from line 10:
    "dark, pine scented
    woods
    ."

  • , or the repetition of sounds,
    usually consonant sounds, as in lines 1-2:

My story on
Monday
began:
Mountainous
seas
crashed
on the
cliffs
. .
.

Figures of speech that are
tropes:


  • , as in the relations between the middle two
    lines of each stanza and the last line of each stanza.

  • Metaphors, as in the reference to "Red
    tongues of fire
    " in line 6.
  • Ultimate
    irony
    , as in the way the final stanza suggests the final defeat of the writers
    creativity and a final victory for the teachers prosaic dullness and concern with mere stale
    conventions.

Other Devices of Literary
Form:

  • Vivid
    adjectives
    , as in line three: And the
    desolate land grew wetter
    ...
  • Emphatic
    variations in line lengths
    , as in the line that follows the
    one just quoted:
    The teacher wrote a little note: Remember the capital
    letter!
      Here the much longer line that ends the stanza helps contrast the
    voice of the speaker with the voice of the teacher.

  • Contrasts in language and
    tone
    ,as in lines 2-3 and 1 and 4.  Lines 1 and 4 are plain
    and prosaic;lines 2-3 are striking and memorable. In contrast to lines 2-3, line 4is deflating
    and ironically bland.

  • , as in the line just
    quoted.
  • Vivid verbs, as in
    "twists" in line 11.

The poem is
a€“ at once comic and sad €“ on the ways that teaching can sometimes kill the interest of
students and on the ways that teachers, rather than inspiring and encouraging students, can
often destroy their self-confidence and interest.

For an especially helpful
discussion of this poem, see the "Heinemann.com" link below.

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