Eve Merriam
uses sound devices, puns, and metaphors in her poem "Thumbprint."
The sound devices she uses include , consonance, assonance, and rhyme. In the beginning
of the poem, the words "whorls, whirls, and wheels" are strongly alliterative with the
/wh/ sound, but they also have consonance with the /ls/ sounds that occur at the ends of the
words. "Flesh" and "feelings" are also alliterative. Another example of
consonance is the /mp/ sound in the words "impress, implant." The words
"contain" and "same" are an example of assonance, or repetition of vowel
sounds. Although the poem doesn't contain a regular rhyme scheme, there are some lines that have
end rhyme. "Alone" and "own," "key" and "singularity,"
and "sum" and "become" are the strongest rhymes. Finally, although
alliteration usually occurs in words that are in close proximity, the use of the word
"world" in the penultimate line creates pleasant alliterative symmetry with
"whorls" and "whirls" in the second line.
There are a
number of puns, or examples of wordplay, in the poem. Lines 5 and 6 present two different
meanings of the word "own." The thumb is said to be a "universe key" and a
"singularity." "Singularity" means uniqueness, but it also can refer to
matter within a black hole, giving it a double meaning by its proximity to the word
"universe." Likewise the two meanings of "impress" are implied at the same
time: to evoke admiration and to make a mark. And the word "mark" has a dual meaning:
First, it refers to having a noticeable effect; second, it means to leave a physical
sign.
The poem contains a number of metaphors, such as "universe
key" and "treasure," which cannot be taken literally. Near the end of the poem,
Merriam speaks of creating "interior weather." This is a metaphorical description of
one's mood and thoughts.
By using many metaphors, puns, and sound devices,
Merriam creates an evocative and intriguing poem.
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