Monday, February 27, 2012

Help reword and amplify word choice to make the quote fit and increase the flow of the sentence. This imaginative scenario is ruled by a...

Given the
context of 's work, I thought that some level of rework was needed.  The new version is a bit
different from the original:

In this imaginative
scenario, a totalitarian government controls what it deems to be the truth.  This extends to
dictating what is viewed as the past, present, and future.  Within this setting, the idea of
who controls the past controls the future is non- existent.  A world where lies...


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