Although the
    above post gives some interesting suggestions about labeling meter, there are other focuses for
    annotating a poem.  For example, you can annotate for figurative language and the meaning it
    grants the poem.  The title The Harp of India seems to suggest a , and the background of Henry
    Louis Vivian Derozio is pro-Indian independence from Great Britain.  Knowing that, lets annotate
    for metaphors.
Since you have given us the first lines, well use
    those.
Why hang'st thou
lonely on yon withered bough?
This is an interesting line.  It seems to indicate that the fruit (Indian independence)
    has a choice.  Why is it still hanging there?  I chose two words to highlight.  I also
    highlighted lonely because it seems to indicate isolation, like it has been left
    behind.
Unstrung for ever,
must thou there remain;
I
    chose to highlight for ever and remain because it indicates that the situation is dire. 
    There is no hope for India.  Separating "for" and "ever" emphasizes the
    length of time.
Thy music
once was sweet - who hears it
now?
I annotated these words
    to continue the same trend of time in the metaphor.  It tells the story of a country that was
    once successful, but is not isolated, neglected, and a shadow of its former self.
Remember that the key to annotation is to look deeper at the words on the page.  You
    can annotate across several times for several reasons.  There is no right or wrong answerit just
    depends on what you are looking for and how you interpret it.
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