What would be a good thesis statement for a Holocaust essay? What would be a good thesis statement about how inhumane the concentration camps were in...

You
need to consider the facts before you think about the thesis statement. By its very nature, a
thesis statement must be developed to fit the evidence, rather than the other way
around.

Obviously, the concentration camps during the Holocaust were
inhumane; this is not a thesis statement, because it cannot be disputed. Therefore, you need to
think about what in particular the evidence shows. What are the main points you want to cover?
Do you want to discuss only the death of Jewish prisoners during WWII, or are you thinking more
inclusively? You could also debate the definition of what is inhumane and what this meansthink
about the use of numbers instead of names in the camps, for instance.

Your
thesis statement needs to have some individual quality to make it different from everyone elses.
What specific topics do you want to cover in your essay? Start with these, and then lay out what
it is you feel they show.