Can someone edit these two paragraphs on why 1984 by George Orwell is meaningful to me? This novel is meaningful because of its relevance in todays...

I would make
the following changes, which I have marked:

This novel is meaningful because
of its relevance for todays society. In Egypt, a country which
has revolted to overthrow its ruler, we
find many similarities to the Oceania described in 's
. There was even a reference made to Orwell's
novel by Mohammad El Baradei, who tweeted Since January 25th, innocents
continue to be...